A rather forlorn style yet also finely formed, never becoming purple prose yet maintaining a poetic touch. But also relating to real life, our problems, what it is being human.
Ha, all those sounds nice!
Nobody, just the waves, I’d like that.
This void seems like quite a character!
Yes, meditating. Sometimes, it takes just a little humanity to distract us from our little voids.
I imagine that surfer with a TMNT voice XD I like how you use dialogue and gesticulation to express his character.
Horizon, not the wave, peculiar. Kinda reminds me of driving, has a similar sensation.
Precious stones to describe waves, very nicely done.
But…maybe a surfing lesson tomorrow, doc!
That’s all for tonight, thank you for sharing this.
Outstanding and surreal! Just like how the scene outside and within the protagonist melt into a cohesive sort of hallucination, this story took me and immersed me in it.
Ahh thank you Michael. I didn’t know what to write about so I got a random prompt of ‘a doctor and surfer and Hawaii’ but gotta infuse self truths. I am glad it’s relatable for you, and I’ve definitely been there too of course.
A rather forlorn style yet also finely formed, never becoming purple prose yet maintaining a poetic touch. But also relating to real life, our problems, what it is being human.
Ha, all those sounds nice!
Nobody, just the waves, I’d like that.
This void seems like quite a character!
Yes, meditating. Sometimes, it takes just a little humanity to distract us from our little voids.
I imagine that surfer with a TMNT voice XD I like how you use dialogue and gesticulation to express his character.
Horizon, not the wave, peculiar. Kinda reminds me of driving, has a similar sensation.
Precious stones to describe waves, very nicely done.
But…maybe a surfing lesson tomorrow, doc!
That’s all for tonight, thank you for sharing this.
Thank you for the comment & for reading Jonathan 😊
Focus on the horizon, not on the wave. Surfer man is wise. I tend to get caught up in the moment and forget what I'm trying to do and achieve.
Thank you for reading Louis!
Outstanding and surreal! Just like how the scene outside and within the protagonist melt into a cohesive sort of hallucination, this story took me and immersed me in it.
Cannot wait to read more of your works!
Hearing you were immersed in it is so awesome, thank you for letting me know and reading! I look forward to your works too!
This is great, Melissa - keep it up
Thank you for the encouragement! ✍🏼
Great read - aaaand life advice. Id say that's nailing it!
Thank you for reading and leaving this nice comment!
I like how you tied the symbols at the end, glimpsing hope at dawn
Thank you Benno! 🌊
Thank you for reading! & thanks and sharing which part comes across well, gives me a good idea on what to keep honing in on.
Ahh thank you Michael. I didn’t know what to write about so I got a random prompt of ‘a doctor and surfer and Hawaii’ but gotta infuse self truths. I am glad it’s relatable for you, and I’ve definitely been there too of course.