First of, (and maybe because I still have much to learn in writing) but I really think you have one of the 'cleanest' (or this story itself is one of the 'cleanest') story telling I have encountered.
Not sure if that makes sense. Basically, I feel it flows just right in its own pace.
Thank you for reading 😭 that was so hard to write 🥴 idk desert stuff is out of element. and the editing took foreverrrr bc I was so wordy like what you pointed out and had to cut a bunch to be <5k. It’s done!!! Crying screaming throwing up. Ready to get back to reading your stories.
That was a wild ride!
😆 thanks for reading
"melt away in a purging fantasy of disintegrating Suburban rubble." Love that line
Thank you for reading Nicky! 😊
Thanks for the read.
First of, (and maybe because I still have much to learn in writing) but I really think you have one of the 'cleanest' (or this story itself is one of the 'cleanest') story telling I have encountered.
Not sure if that makes sense. Basically, I feel it flows just right in its own pace.
Thank you for reading 😭 that was so hard to write 🥴 idk desert stuff is out of element. and the editing took foreverrrr bc I was so wordy like what you pointed out and had to cut a bunch to be <5k. It’s done!!! Crying screaming throwing up. Ready to get back to reading your stories.
🤣🤣🤣