‘Paper-thin relationships’ sounds like a double entendre. Cuz straws can be paper-thin, but also the relationship is literally unstable. Nice work. This unreliable-narrator style matches my Holden instincts.
Came here from Emil Ottomen's autopsy of this piece and I think I am staying. loved every minute of it. This is such a funny piece! "Sword Guy" is the male equivalent of "Crazy Cat Lady", but far more deserving of derision. I mean, a cat will destroy your furniture too, but at least they are warm when you cuddle with them.
My mouth hung open as a read "113 swords." At first I thought it were only a couple, and then I burst out laughing thinking about the arduous amount of time it'd take to actually practice swinging with closed eyes ONE HUNDRED AND THIRTEEN SWORDS, sleeping outside. I could only imagine how the narrator smells!
Thank you for reading! I’d say yes lol writing is your ‘swords’ in the best way. Ugh yeah, gotta tap into the flow state and trust. I’ve been overthinking insanely and writing so slow now after the information overload i put myself through. The first story was first attempt at writing and 100% flow. Everything else has been painstaking and wrought with rules or questioning myself etc. I think we gotta just keep going for it and not get hung up on blunders, just go go go. Been having less time to read/write - need to catch up with your latest.
‘Paper-thin relationships’ sounds like a double entendre. Cuz straws can be paper-thin, but also the relationship is literally unstable. Nice work. This unreliable-narrator style matches my Holden instincts.
😄 thanks for reading
Came here from Emil Ottomen's autopsy of this piece and I think I am staying. loved every minute of it. This is such a funny piece! "Sword Guy" is the male equivalent of "Crazy Cat Lady", but far more deserving of derision. I mean, a cat will destroy your furniture too, but at least they are warm when you cuddle with them.
😆 thats a good point, he is like the male version of a crazy cat lady. I am happy you enjoyed it, thank you for reading!
I love that you can transcend to become these characters so naturally.
Thank you for reading!
'That’s when I knew I was ready. After practicing with every single one of my 113 swords...'
haha - brilliant!
I feel like I’ve met this dude! Fun story. Good prompt from the nephew! 😊
🤣 many of them out there. Haha my friend’s dad has a growing sword collection so partly inspired by him too. Thanks for reading!
My mouth hung open as a read "113 swords." At first I thought it were only a couple, and then I burst out laughing thinking about the arduous amount of time it'd take to actually practice swinging with closed eyes ONE HUNDRED AND THIRTEEN SWORDS, sleeping outside. I could only imagine how the narrator smells!
Great, great work!
😆 omg lets not think about the smells! Thanks for reading
This was terrific! Now I am questioning if writing is my "swords".... eesh
Thank you for reading! I’d say yes lol writing is your ‘swords’ in the best way. Ugh yeah, gotta tap into the flow state and trust. I’ve been overthinking insanely and writing so slow now after the information overload i put myself through. The first story was first attempt at writing and 100% flow. Everything else has been painstaking and wrought with rules or questioning myself etc. I think we gotta just keep going for it and not get hung up on blunders, just go go go. Been having less time to read/write - need to catch up with your latest.
Men would rather do a whole list of insanity before going to therapy lmao